Writing Business Bids & Proposals For Dummies®
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This may come as a bit of a surprise to you, but some people write proposals for a living and enjoy it.
We don’t mean people who have to write proposals to sell their products and services as an obligatory part of their roles as business owners, salespeople, and entrepreneurs. We mean people who write proposals as their profession — it’s their primary role. They delight in this intricate, detail-oriented, thought-provoking work. They toil for businesses big and small, and all they do all day (and all night at times) is write proposals. Some write proposals that are a handful of pages, while others write proposals with hundreds of pages in multiple volumes. Some write them pretty much on their own, while others coordinate the efforts of anywhere from a couple of specialists to hundreds on a single deal. They propose to every kind of business and government entity you can imagine, because most publicly owned or regulated enterprises buy goods and services through proposals.
It may not matter to you personally, but proposal writing is a profession — a growing and increasingly important one. It’s an essential part of a broader group of business development professionals who plan and execute strategies for businesses to obtain new customers. Proposal writers have a professional organization — the Association of Proposal Management Professionals (APMP) — whose best practices are the foundation for this book. This group of more than 7,500 practitioners from around the world knows that proposal writing is a skill you can learn, practice, and master, and, ultimately, prove your mastery of through a professional certification process.
Here’s what does matter to you: Writing Business Bids & Proposals For Dummies is your easiest and best ticket for finding out what these professional proposal writers know and for applying it to your own business. You have in your hands the collected knowledge and skills of the professional proposal writer — without having to be one.
This book is primarily for small- to medium-size business owners, first-time proposal writers in medium-size companies, or sales representatives who need to represent their companies in the best light possible. A written proposal, whether it’s delivered in print or digital format, is still one of the most common, personal, and effective ways to win business, even in this age of near-instant online communications, social media marketing, and live-action websites.
Proposal writers have an old saying: “The best proposal won’t win the business outright, but a bad one will certainly lose it.” This means that a proposal doesn’t work in a vacuum. Developing a successful business is a complex and difficult process, with lots of interworking parts. You have to have useful and reliable products, dedicated people providing a dependable service, and innovative thinking that can solve unique problems. But even if you have the best products, the best people, and the best service record of anyone in your industry, if you can’t express those advantages clearly and persuasively in terms that truly mean something to your customers, your business will never be as successful as it can be.
If you adopt the concepts, implement the processes, practice the techniques, and adapt the tools in this book to meet your unique needs, you’ll improve the way your business captures new customers and communicates with existing ones. This book can help you to
After you have a process and the required resources in place, this book can guide you to
We also use a few conventions throughout the book to make finding what you need easier:
As we wrote this book, we assumed a few things about you, dear readers:
www.apmp.org
for more information.We use a few icons throughout this book to call out important information that you may otherwise miss.
We’ve created a handy, access-anywhere Cheat Sheet, which provides high-level reminders that you can easily reference when you don’t have the book on hand. For instance, are you looking for a reminder of some of the key reviews you can undertake to help develop and perfect your proposal process? The Cheat Sheet helps you remember at a glance. To access this Cheat Sheet, go to www.dummies.com
and search for “Writing Business Bids & Proposals For Dummies Cheat Sheet” in the Search box.
We’ve also created a one-stop-shop for all digital content related to this book. Check out the appendix at the end of the book for the URL and a list of the online templates and checklists.
Writing Business Bids & Proposals For Dummies takes you from the basic concepts behind proposal writing and the practical techniques you apply to create winning proposals to advanced concepts you may consider after you’ve mastered the basics. We recommend that you check out the table of contents for the complete list of topics, and then read Chapter 1 to get the end-to-end story from 30,000 feet.
You don’t need to read this book in any particular sequence. Each chapter is self-contained, tackles a single proposal-related subject, and, like a good proposal, has cross-references to related information. Just pick a chapter that addresses an immediate problem you have, and read, think, and apply. For example, are you already responding to an RFP? Look to Chapter 4 for advice on identifying all the customer’s requirements, or jump to Chapter 9 for ways to collect and structure your past-performance records.
And last (or maybe first), to get a general “lay of the land” in proposal writing, be sure to review our simple proposal process in Chapter 6. This list of major steps provides an “at-a-glance” view of the many duties a proposal writer performs over the span of developing either a proactive proposal or an RFP response.
Appendix
We wrote Writing Business Bids & Proposals For Dummies for people who write a few proposals each year in the commercial market — that is, small business owners, salespeople, and lone proposal writers. This book will help you understand how to write customer-focused, persuasive proposals that win more business.
We want to give you more than just ideas and instructions, however, so here we provide details on how you can access some practical tools and examples for improving your proposals. This appendix details the collection of all the online resources, tools, and templates that we reference throughout this book. We hope that you’ll use them, adapt them, and improve them (and when you do, we’d love to hear from you and use your ideas to make them better). That’s what the Association of Proposal Management Professionals (APMP) is all about: being better proposal writers and managers every time out.
For more information about the APMP, go to www.apmp.org
. To access the resources you need, simply visit www.apmp.org/page/proposalsfordummies
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In Table A-1, we map each resource to the chapter (or chapters) of this book where we refer to it.
TABLE A-1 Proposal Resources
Chapter(s) |
Resource |
Description |
2 |
Example of RFP |
Representative model of a commercial Request for Proposal (RFP). A document from a customer or funding source calling for proposals for a specific program, project, or work effort. |
2 |
Example of RFQ |
Representative model of a commercial Request for Quotation (RFQ). Often a brief RFP that focuses on a few key requirements and asks for a price quote. |
2 |
Example of RFI |
Representative model of a commercial Request for Information (RFI). A customer document used at an early stage of a procurement to create a list of viable bidders who will later be invited to render an offer or respond to an RFP. |
4 |
Customer question tracker |
A table to help you track the questions you and your competitors ask the customer during an RFP period. |
4, 16 |
Compliance matrix |
A list of specific customer requirements from an RFP. The matrix often splits complex, multipart requirements into sub-requirements. It also helps proposal managers and internal reviewers verify that the RFP response meets all the customer’s requirements. |
5 |
Strengths, weaknesses, opportunities, and threats (SWOT) analysis instructions and template |
An analysis that bidders perform to assess their competitive positioning and identify the steps they must take to develop a compelling, winning proposal. |
6, 14 |
Kickoff meeting agenda |
A schedule for leading the meeting that starts the proposal effort for all contributors. It includes activities such as answering questions about the opportunity, assigning writing tasks, setting milestones, and creating a cohesive team. |
6, 14 |
Kickoff meeting briefing |
Collection of references, templates, and tools to help the proposal team write a proactive proposal or RFP response. It includes customer profile, draft executive summary, opportunity overview, customer background, competitive assessment, proposal strategy, proposal schedule, and solution approach. |
6, 10 |
Style sheet |
Writing guidelines for authors so they can work separately from others and still deliver content that meets a single standard. Saves time and effort for lone proposal writers because it reminds them of issues easily forgotten, such as word usage, formatting, grammar, and spelling. |
6, 13, 16 |
Proactive proposal template |
A preformatted word-processing file with predefined headers, footers, headings, and text blocks to guide users as they write proactive commercial proposals. |
2, 6, 16 |
Reactive response template |
A preformatted word-processing file with predefined headers, footers, and other standard elements that allows users to insert a customer’s RFP and then respond as directed. |
6, 9 |
Transmittal letter for a proactive proposal |
A model for introducing a commercial proposal to a prospective customer. |
6, 9 |
Transmittal letter for a reactive response |
A model for introducing a commercial RFP response to a customer. |
6, 12 |
Oral proposal template |
A model for developing a live proposal presentation following a successful submittal. |
8, 16 |
Proposal schedule |
Three sample “calendar style” templates, including key deliverables and milestones, for delivering proactive proposals or RFP responses. |
8 |
Example Gantt chart |
A sample management tool (horizontal bar chart) for identifying and tracking progress on activities, milestones, and deliverables over the life of a project. |
8, 16 |
Budget template |
A preformatted worksheet with standard expense categories to forecast and track potential proposal expenses. |
9 |
Executive summary template |
A preformatted word-processing file with predefined headers, footers, headings, and text blocks to guide users as they write proactive commercial executive summaries. |
9, 10, 13 |
Four-part RFP question-response model |
Structured writing model for answering RFP questions consistently and clearly. (Based on the issue/discussion/point pattern concept devised by Joseph M. Williams and Gregory G. Colomb; refer to Chapter 10 for more). |
10 |
Activating nominalizations guide |
Job aid to help writers identify and eliminate nominalizations and improve the clarity and concision of their text. |
12 |
Final review checklist |
A list of requirements so proposal reviewers can effectively assess the entire proposal — its compliance, readiness, and responsiveness, plus its effectiveness in conveying the proposal’s themes, fulfilling its strategy, and depicting its discriminators. |
13, 15, 16 |
Checklist for internal lessons-learned review |
This template guides you as you get feedback (both positive and negative) from your internal team so you can continually improve the capture and proposal processes. |
14 |
Stoplight chart |
A simple chart showing a red, yellow, or green status for each major activity during a project. |
14 |
Responsibility matrix |
An extension of a compliance matrix that identifies proposal team members and their specific proposal section responsibilities. |
15, 16 |
Checklist of questions for customer debrief |
This template guides you while obtaining positive and negative feedback from your customer on how your proposal scored in its evaluation. |
15 |
Proof points tracking checklist |
Provides a comprehensive list of potential reusable content objects to support your claims. |
16 |
Past performance template |
A structured format for creating and retaining knowledge about previous projects so you can provide proofs for your claims. |
16 |
Customer contact plan |
A reference document that lists the customers you plan to contact, who in your company will visit them, what you want to find out, what you want to communicate, when and where you’ll meet, and how you’ll communicate your messages. The plan also includes a placeholder for the information you gather during a customer meeting. |
16 |
Bid/no-bid analysis |
A guided assessment template to use after you’ve completed the opportunity plan that validates whether you’re properly positioned to win. |
16 |
Production resources checklist |
An accounting of all the human, equipment, and monetary resources you may need to produce and deliver your proposal to the customer. |
16 |
Production checklist |
A list of document attributes that your published proposal should meet. |
16 |
Editing checklist |
A list of criteria that an editor should ensure a proposal meets before submission. The checklist covers grammar, punctuation, capitalization, clarity, readability, consistency, and persuasiveness. |
Part 1
IN THIS PART …
Find out what proposals are and why everyone in business needs to know how to write them. Take a peek into the world of professional proposal writers and how they do their jobs. Look at the bigger picture and how proposals fit into a business’s sales process and a customer’s buying process.
Discover the similarities and differences between proactive proposals and reactive proposals (or responses to a Request for Proposal [RFPs]). See how to avoid the traps lurking in RFPs and how to make sure the customer finds what it’s looking for. Understand how creating a consistent structure and format for your proactive proposals can help customers choose you over your competitors.
Chapter 1
IN THIS CHAPTER
Getting the intel on bids and proposals
Gearing up for your proposal
Developing a professional approach
This book is about writing business bids and proposals. Why bids and proposals, you ask? Aren’t they the same thing?
Many proposal professionals would say so. Others favor one term over the other, especially when used to modify another term. For example, in the United Kingdom, they may say bid manager and tender; in the United States, we say proposal manager and Request for Proposal (RFP) response — and we mean pretty much the same thing.
Some people think of bids as something we’d call a quote — a line or two about the offer and a price — something you can write on the back of a napkin. Some may even call that a proposal. The more people you talk to, the more confused you can get.
As we use the terms, bids and proposals are more formal, more thorough, more informative, more persuasive, more descriptive, and more professional than quotes. They’re more about communication than selling, more about value than price, and more about relationships than a single deal. Throughout this book, we use them interchangeably because it’s how proposal professionals talk: A bid is a proposal; a bidder is someone who submits a proposal or bid (and we’d never use the word proposer).
In this chapter, we introduce you to the world of bid and proposal management — what proposals do, how they work, and how you write one — drawing from the best practices that bid and proposal professionals use worldwide.
In the broadest sense, business proposals are formal, written offers by businesses or individuals to perform work on the behalf of other businesses, government entities, or other individuals. Proposals set out in clear, concise language what you’ll do for a customer, how you’ll do it, how much it will cost, and the business benefits the customer will realize after the work is done. Proposals aim to both inform and persuade. And that makes them pretty unique.
In some industries, business proposals are precursors to contracts. That’s why many proposals stipulate how long certain offers or prices are valid. Some government entities require the proposals they receive to be authorized by a bidder’s officer to underscore their legal status. Some proposals even become an integral part of the final contract.
Both types consist of a series of textual and visual components that form an argument in support of your approach to solving a customer’s problem.
In the following sections, we discuss the differences between RFP responses and proactive proposals — their structures and some of the rules around writing them — and then discuss the reasons why organizations issue RFPs.
Before we go any further, we cover how you construct RFP responses and proactive proposals and why they’re different.
Turn to Chapter 2 to find out more about the similarities and differences between RFP responses and proactive proposals.
RFPs are the procurement method of choice for most governments and large organizations. Most RFPs, regardless of the source, have similar structures. Government RFPs have elaborate number schemes and consistent, required sections. Commercial RFPs may have these as well, but the formats and sequences can vary widely from industry to industry and from RFP to RFP.
Though RFPs can have many surface differences, most contain individual sections that do the following:
Many RFPs instruct you to include in your response an executive summary, which you need to do whether instructed to or not (unless the RFP explicitly forbids you to). As you see in Chapter 9, an executive summary is your best chance to explain your solution and its value to the customer’s highest ranking decision maker (who won’t normally read the entire proposal). You never want to miss out on the opportunity to communicate directly to a customer’s leaders.
Proactive proposals, more or less, also follow a standard structure. The difference is that with proactive proposals, you control the structure, although you should always use a structure that customers find comfortable, satisfying, and compelling. The standard sections include
High-level differences exist between RFP responses and proactive proposals that involve how you adhere to the rules, work with time frames, and handle the competitive landscape.
Proactive proposals have only the rules a customer sets when you offer to submit one. Your customers will hopefully be intrigued enough by your solution to put aside their hard-and-fast rules and allow you to present your solution in your preferred format. Proactive proposals can look like, well, whatever you think your customer wants them to look like: magazine articles, business letters, glossy brochures, or even (ugh) RFP responses.
RFPs are deadline driven. If you miss the deadline, you’re usually eliminated. That may sound harsh, but it’s not necessarily a bad thing. With an RFP response, at least you have an engaged customer setting a clear deadline.
With proactive proposals, you may have nothing more than a customer’s promise to consider your idea. Your salesperson may set a date with the customer to deliver a proactive proposal, but you may find that the date slips as other sales initiatives take precedence or if the salesperson gets distracted and doesn’t provide you what you need to finish the proposal by the due date. And your customer won’t be as obligated to review your proposal when it does arrive.
Salespeople try to avoid RFPs because they are, by design, more competitive than proactive proposals. By releasing an RFP, customers consciously pit competitors against each other. You present proactive proposals after you’ve worked with customers long enough to see inside their operations and discover areas where your business’s expertise can benefit them. And although a customer may entertain multiple proactive proposals to solve a problem, you usually have much less competition, if any, to worry about.
Knowing how to write proposals well is important because most mid- to large-size organizations acquire services and products through proposals. Many regulated industries and government entities must, by statute, set up an RFP competition so they can create a fair basis for comparing vendors and solutions. Others release RFPs because they know pretty much what they want and are trying to find the best, lowest-cost provider. Still others release RFPs because they’re unhappy with their current provider’s performance and know that an RFP can remedy the situation, one way or another.